97%: A pleasant, enjoyable Short Film in my opinion.
97% link–> https://vimeo.com/143233550
At the suggestion of colin, one of my tutors i made a Vimeo account and started looking around, i found this film and thought that it was quite funny and charming. I’m sure all of my tutors have said this to me more than once before but i remember Scott saying it most, that is that a short film can be a very simple idea that is played out.
This is the case with this film as the story goes like this: bert is on the train home and gets a notification from a dating app saying there has been a profile match nearby to him with a match rating of 97% the rest of the film is him trying to find this girl. like i said, simple idea but its quite a nice short film thats funny and interesting.
Something that this film did that i have noticed seems to be a fairly common or popular theme with short films is the distinct lack of any dialogue, this offers the opportunity to show a lot of character through expressions and body language
Ill be using the worksheet from colin’s lesson to break down the film into different ways to analyse it, this sheet highlights: camera and lighting, locations, audio recording, editing and the story.
First of all, the camera and lighting. In my opinion the lighting in this film was good and well used but, of the two the one that stuck out to me was the camera work. for the majority of the film it is either a wide close up or a close shot of the face of the protagonist or if not that it is showing what it is hes looking at which is mostly different women scattered around the train car that he is in. Something that struck me as a nice touch was that in one scene, he is focused on the woman sat in front of him but he is looking at her reflection to the left of her in the window. anyway the camera is looking at him looking to the left off screen, and there is a noticeable increase in camera shaking, i think that this was meant to show that it was a point of view shot of the woman looking at him who is looking at her reflection and smiling and then when he notices shes smiling back at his reflection they look at each other in person. i believe that he looks at reflections one or two other times in the film but u really enjoyed that scene. and thought it worked very well, especially when this is combined with the fact that the only insight as to what they’re thinking is expressed through their smiles, and hushed giggles as they look at each other.
Next is the Location. Most of it was shot in a train and for the little bits that weren’t, they were on platforms and one shot where he leaves the station in search of his match. The location worked well with what little story they had because it gives you information about the character. clearly hes trying to find this woman with such a high match percentage but the use of location was quite smart in my opinion because it added a sense of urgency to the characters search because it is shown that the woman is on the same train as him so he has the goal of finding her before the train stops at the next station. i think that their use of location fit very well because it was such a simple idea as a story they needed to use specific elements such as the location to their advantage in order to strengthen the film as a whole.
After that is the Audio recording throughout the film it has a simple, yet cheery or maybe perky tune, though strangely enough it plays when he is specifically looking for the woman at the times when he is in danger of losing track of her, for example the times when people are leaving the train or when he is searching the platform for her, it was selective however in the way that it doesn’t play too often so as to get annoying or play too loud to drag attention from the slightly comic slightly desperate search of the character. Another nice thing in relation to sound was the Foley, things like people speaking over speakers on platforms or the hiss as the doors closed were ever present but not invasive to the story. they added to the realism perfectly in my opinion and the best example of this in the film is the dull rumble of the train wheels on the tracks, if i remember correctly they were constantly in the background and it provided a very pleasant sense of calm while this man was silently seeking his match slowly getting more and more frustrated with the task. another major part of the sound in this film is the sound of the phones notifications, the first time his phone goes off is the proper beginning of the film because it gives the character a sense of purpose that is the whole point of the story, so it is a way for us as the audience to anticipate information that will become available to the character that will help ascertain the location of his match
next, The Editing. At the start of the film, it shows the man thoughtlessly making his way to his train home, and on his way it has a small shot of his gaze drifting to a couple cuddling as they ride the escalator up and away from him. but then it immediately shows him entering the train and sitting down i thought that this was a very smart way to add a bit of character within the first couple seconds of the film. the way his gaze so noticeably drifts to the couple it shows what he wants already, and how he is feeling at the start of the film which is feelings of sadness or perhaps loneliness this is also his motivation for seeking the woman so intently. The rest of the film is edited in the way to show us his search, when he is sat down and unable to move around to look for her it shows us the people he considers a possibility and shows us his face to show us whether he thinks its them, and in the times when he’s free to move about it shows us quick shots of him running to and fro, i believe this shows quite skillfully the urgency of his search.
finally there is the Story. i think after talking about the other aspects of production for this film, there isn’t much that need be said about it. True though it is that the story is incredibly simple it is in my opinion expertly saturated by things in this film such as the camera work, audio and particularly the location. it is as Mark keeps repeating in lessons the simplest ideas can lead to some of the best films. with an idea such as a man searches for a woman based on details about her, based on her dating profile on a train you have to enhance it with good usage of the other parts of the films which this film did quite well, so i think that the story was empowered through these means.